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a) How has this article changed over time? What were some of the changes you found most interesting or important?  ﻿Most of the article had been changed and only very few words were kept the same. In fact, 3/4 or more of the article was changed. Details were added and words were changed in order to suit the article. More topics were also added such as how Germany was hoping for the government to solve its social problems in the 19th and 20th centuries and the camps Germany set up to hold the Jews. I think the newer version is better because it explains in more detail about how this happened and I think there is more detail because over time people were slowly unraveling facts about the holocaust.   b) What have been the discussions about the writing of this article? How were they solved or addressed? There was some people asking why the holocaust article was based on the killing of the Jews and not other ethnic groups that were killed as well. The question/problem was solved when somebody said that other ethnic groups were kept prisoners and most survived but the Jews were killed wether or not they were prisoners. Most other discussions were a bit confusing since I do not know that much about the holocaust, but they said somethings in a mean way as though they were people that always thought they were right. I noticed though that the person that told the editor about the 2 typing mistakes was quite nice and friendly and the reply was just as friendly, or so it seemed. I did not know people read the article so carefully that they would spot 2 spelling mistakes in such a long article. The last sentence was a bit off topic but i thought it was interesting and maybe you might too. c) If you were going to add edits to this article, what would you do to improve it  ﻿If I were going to edit this article I do not think I could change much of the facts although I do think that maybe they should make more paragraphs and add some pictures because the length and the fact that it is mainly long paragraphs and not many pictures bores me almost as soon as I start reading and I am sure it would bore an adult if they read it unless they were extremely into it and had studied it or was studying it intensely.